Hello folks!
When I saw this topic of fragrance , to write poetry on (for a competetion),literally I was like ” how come anyone can write a poem on fragrance?”, i didn’t have a clue. But later on ,few ideas popped up in my mind and then i tried to go ahead .FINALLY, after a great deal of thinking ,I had been able to pen down a poem on the life of a fragrance.
So here it goes…..
I take birth in nature’s lap ,shielded by the sky ,unbound and surrounded by the greenery all around.
My birth is a thing of celebration for one and all, everyone comes to visit me without any call.
i love to dance and travel, and go past the streets ,lanes and different places
To name a few, near the vanilla tree or a rose flower.
i also lie dormant in sand and wake up when i meet that heavenly downpour.
My parents never try to confine me, i go where ever i want to go,
i live my life with full liberty!
My presence is cherished ,and my absence passes into nothingness,
You see, i am always a source of cheers and happiness.
But ,there are some wicked creatures,
who come into my home and crushes my parents brutally,
they pluck them, they break them, and then rob me of my liberty
I feel helpless and wonder at the thought,
that how can people claim anything over which they have no right.
i cry for help ,but my tears fail to reach their sight!
and my happy family is shattered at the hands of their misery !
They enjoy trapping me in their opulent and ostentatios bottles,
and limits my access only to those who have money.
they insist me to live and make me eat chemicals and medicines,
Oh god! when would these men realise the magnitude of their sins!
i can neither be seen nor be heard, but you can still feel my essence.
My parents didn’t give me a name ,but i heard people calling me as ‘fragrance’.
So, I hope that you too did feel this journey of the unseen and the unheard!!
THANKS FOR READING! ππ
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Thank you π
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Why r u laughing?
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I was happy that you liked my post…just that.
Anything not okay with it?
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Nahi!! Absolutely fine I just thought that u were thinking something funny internally……
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Ohkk.
Well , if there would be anything funny that I was enjoying,then I would never mind to share it with you.ππ€
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Great personification! The last two lines gave it a perfect ending, Chetna. π
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Thank you so much Aa’eedah, your words have filled me with motivation!ππ
I am glad that you liked it.
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This is so good!
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Thank you very much.
It’s pleasure to know that you liked it.πβ¨
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A very amazing poem π…… I thoroughly enjoyed reading it π….. Aage badho meree sher π
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Thank you Komal!πβ€
It is my pleasure to know that you enjoyed the journey.πβ¨
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Wow…. Beautiful poem Just I can say u r really a fragrance spreading your aroma around πkeep writing these poems
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Oh ,dear!!
Thanks a ton.ππ
Really, it means to me ,man!!β€β€
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Beautifully expressed! ππ
A journey full of everything….π
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Thank you Bhavya.
I am glad that you enjoyed the journey!β€β¨π€
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Nice poem
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I am glad that you liked it.π€
Thanks for stopping byπβ¨
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Most welcome ππ
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Loved this thoroughly ! Keep blogging ! β€
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Thank you Shreya ,for stopping by !
it is a pleasure to know that you loved it ππ«
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Nice blog π
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Thank you Saania for stopping by. Glad you liked it.ππ«π
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My pleasure, followed you! π€π€
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Thanks once again for the aboveππ
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Hello Chetna! (For me Chittu XD)
Iβve nominated you for βWanna Know You Better!β
Hope youβll participate and allow me to know YOU better! π (Do I really need that? xD)
Check the post here.
https://bhavyascreativecorner.wordpress.com/2020/05/23/wanna-know-you-better/
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Thanks a ton, dear. You got me a wide ,broad smile for this.(hope you are having the same right nowπ) well, there’s nothing much i have about me that is unknown to you!π but it will be fun and pleasure to answer your questions, dear Bhanu!ππ€©
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Your smile has travelled to my face! :))))
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It looks awesome there !!ππ
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You can see it really!
Well, I’m gonna debug my house. XD
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Exactly! you should or you may find yourself in a troubleπ but how do you debug your heart? can you?π
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Well that’s easy! π
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hmm..π§myabe for you .but in either case your smile won’t be able to escape meππ
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Good catcher you’re! π
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well, it is just M2M,H2H ,S2S!!ππ
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Now my M, H ans S are smiling simultaneously! π
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There..(through your eyes) !! I got it dear!πππ
Ohh ..what a perfect combo!ππ
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Lovely indeed!
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Fragrance β₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈ great personification πβ€οΈπππ
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Thanks for stopping by.
Glad that you liked itβ¨πππ«π«
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Yeah,,, I like it… β€β€β€
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Thanks once again..Lynπππ
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Nice one ! Nice reads ! π
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Thank you for stopping by. Glad that you like itππ«β¨
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Beautiful …
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Thanks Athira.π
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You’re welcome
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