सज़ा ….

हमने तो उन्हें बेझिझक बोलने की इजाज़त दी थी
ओर वो बिन सोचे समझे बोलने की गु़स्ताखी कर बैठे
अंजाम कुछ यूँ हुआ कि
जिस दोस्ती के सहारे कभी जिए थे हम,
अब लगने लगा कि हमने कोई गलती तो नही करदी ?

दुख तो इस बात का है कि उन्हें अंदाज़ा भी नहीं था कि उनसे खता भी हुई थी,
और हमे कोई ये बतादे कि हमे किस खता की सज़ा मिली थी!!!

I allowed him to feel free to say,but he made the mistake of speaking without thinking. The consequence was that the friendship which I lived with, seemed like a mistake. He doesn’t even feel that he committed any mistake, and someone tell me for which mistake of mine I was being punished.

I wrote the above on last 30th December, to be precise. There was something that was making me feel sick and then this was what I came up with. Maybe for them, it wasn’t a big deal, but we don’t have much control over what we feel! But now I am fine. Of course you just can’t hold on to things and lament upon them. And then time is a healer. Isn’t it!

I hope that you liked reading it. By the way, I also got to learn that typing in Hindi can take more time than we think of. 😉

Thanks for reading💜 and do share your views.

Published by Chetna

Hello! First of all ,thank you for stopping by in this city and a heartfelt welcome to you. Myself Chetna,just an ordinarily different girl like you. At times ,I have literally tsunami of emotions in me about various things going on near me.And so here I am ,to calm down that tsunami ,so that the sea inside me can feel peace and have the pleasure of your ship sailing through it!! Here I will be posting my write ups , quotes and some of my favourite pick ups from the stories or novels. I will always be all ears on how you feel after and about reading my posts.So feel free to share your precious views .Hope you will have a good journey! Happy reading!❤

32 thoughts on “सज़ा ….

  1. This was so true. Happens with everyone I guess. Yeah, writing in Hindi takes more time. 😂

    Great work. Good that you healed. Ofc, we have to let go.
    If the mistake is ours, the guilt remains lifelong but atleast we can get a bit of peace thinking that the other person is happy now.

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  2. Somewhere or the other this phase or such relations comes with everyone when you know that the other person is not the same as he/she used to be or the relation you both shared cannot be same again as it used to be. And we are left we no choice but to move on. It hurts a lot but still we have to do it for no one else but for our one sake as we deserve a lot more happiness and worth in life…. May you get so many people in life with whom you feel loved and special 🥰 …. Keep writing📝

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    1. Agreed!
      Moving on is more a need for our ownsleves than for someone else. We just have to accept the futility of our expectations and the hopes. And then, things start falling in place. Thank you so much Komal💜.
      Ykw, I just recently got one.👻😅

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  3. Sometimes the harshest people give the most meaningful lessons in life. I’m sorry that you had to go through that, but you should be proud of the way you have evolved after such an experience though. Its lovely that you tried to experiment with Hindi, I know for a fact that I personally can never do that so kudos to you for trying. 👏

    PS : in these lines “There was something that was making me feel suck and…”. I believe you meant to write sick rather than suck. So may want to rectify that.

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    1. Exactly. I am thankful for this happened. And, definitely this left behind a lesson for me to learn and made me grow as a person.
      Btw, I do write sometimes in Hindi. But this was the first one that I have posted here, so yaa I was not sure of the reviews.😂 Glad you liked it.

      Actually, ykw whenever I feel like freaking out or something like that, this words pops out. And I say like…
      It was sucking!! I don’t know why I do this. But yaa, I should better not use it here. Thanks for letting me know, Sidharth. Will make correction.

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      1. Oh that’s nice, that you are showcasing your bilingual talent here as well. I like listening to urdu shayari and I do a bit myself but never felt like presenting it on WP.

        I guess yes this post was pretty close to you on an emotional level, that’s why the outburst of emotions erupted this way and the fact that you clearly remember the date of the incident is a clear indication of the fact that this was is quite a significant incident. So thank for sharing this post & feel free to express in whatever way you want. You are the writer of your happiness and none should ever censor that. 😊

        PS. I posted a new poem, do let me know what you think about it according to your convenience. 😊🙏

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  4. Thanks, Sidharth.😊
    And I guess you can give one more feast to your followers.😃 I too would like to listen to it. You should definitely think of giving it a try!!

    You are correct. It was quite significant to me. But do keep dropping your suggestions as I know that you have a concern behind that.
    Will surely read it out and share my thoughts about it.

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    1. Oh ho! Kya baat hai, Sundaram.
      Your name rhymes to the above.😁
      I am pleased to know that you could feel the emotions.💫 Thank you.✨

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