In front of me, you don’t need to pretend to be okay. I know that you are quiet just because you want to and not that you don’t have anything to say.
And please stop all this fake smiling. As you know what, you are the worst at acting.
Come here. Let’s sit together. Look at me.
No. Don’t stop them from coming out of your eyes. Let them also be free.
Cry, scream or shout if you feel like. For once, just let go of this burden that you carry.
Dear, I know ’tis difficult but you aren’t alone. We will find a way even through this pain and agony.
See those stars, sitting in the lap of that dark sky.
They burn inside but still shine for us to see. Surrounded by darkness all around but the light within them speaks of their glory.
Let’s sit like this till the stars sleep and the sun sets.
The sun, moon and the stars are eternal;
but they can’t be with you whenever you want them to.
Stars will light only in the night and the sun will shine only when it’s day.
But no matter of night and day in your life,
I promise I will be the one to stay!!
Thanks for reading!β€
Nicely written! Loved the promise made .. the last two lines π
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Thank you Happy Soul.π«β¨π
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Is this the one you were talking about???
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Yups!!
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This is beautiful. But you turned it into something else. π¬
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Like what?π
Well, just the idea to write it was sparked by that one!
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I love it
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I am glad you do.π
Thanks Bharath.β¨
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Wow! Quite the promise this is.
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Thanks Harsh.β¨ππ«
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Good one, Chetna ππ
Yes, there is light in the darkness always
Promise you made ππ
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Thank you so much, Era.πβ¨π«
Maybe, I guess.π
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Warm and assuring β€β€β€
“They burn inside but still shine….” This part is my favourite!!
Everytime we don’t get everything but each moment we can enjoy what we’ve and in this case it’s the company of a true friend…πΈπΈ
Loved thisπ
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Thanks Bhavya.π
Yes!! Everything is with no one. It’s just that we have to look around what we have, and it feels better. It’s good to know that you could find that here!πβ¨π
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Wonderful chetna!!!!
I was finding a line or two I like the most…. But couldn’t…..
Cause the whole is so good I can’t pick and choose na π…..
And ya that’s a big promise πππ
So just make this one with me πππ an unbreakable vow π€£π€£π€£ππ
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Thank you so much Ashee.ππ
And here I am, making a promise to you for always sticking around!
Ohh! Do I really need to say that??πππ
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No ofc! πππ
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Thanks for the 2nd paraβΊοΈπ, very nicely written yrrβ€οΈ
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Haha. Anytime.
Thank you Mukta.ππ«β¨
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Thanks for the 2nd paraβΊοΈπvery nicely written yrr
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This is just astoundingπ€!
Each word very beautifully articulates your thoughts. βΊ
You know somewhere or the other we all need that special person, it may be a friend, a sibling, a teacher or our parents with whom we can share even the most little happenings of our life. That one person with whom we have no fear of being judged. That one person who makes us feel free to tell anything… Any sorrow, any happiness, any feeling and our mistakes too. The thoughts with which you have written this piece of art of yours is lovelyπβ€…. I loved it π
Hope you get a lot of people in your life with whom you can all be yourself and can share everything
Thanks for sharingπ… Keep writing ππ
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Yes. There is that naive self in all of us who wants to be cared and loved and not to be judged. And that person can be anyone who understands us in real terms. Words with them, flow like a river which is free and fearless of losing the direction.
Thanks for such a beautiful wish but I don’t want a lot of like them.π
A few will also do for me.π
It’s a pleasure to know that you could feel it to love it, Komal.ππ
May you also be blessed by such beautiful people around.β¨ππ«
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Loved how you ended it Chetna. Beautiful note of positivity β€οΈ
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Thank you very much, Radhika.ππ«π
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Amazing work, Chetna!
Loved that last paragraph, by the way. Itβs so heartfelt with a positive message. β€οΈ
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Thank you so much, Silver.ππ«
I am glad you could find it so.π
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Youβre most welcome π
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Nicely written!!ππ
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Thanks Nawazish.π€
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Well penned!
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Thanks Aashi.π€π
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Pleasure!!
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Wow. Simply beautiful. Amazing piece of poetry. All those stars were twinkling back to me, and the sun shining. βΊβΊ
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Sometimes we choose to suffer ourselves when we want to shelter our loved ones from potential sufferings. Lovely post loved the compassion that flowed through itπ
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And sometimes, we do need a person to hold on to for gathering the strength to do that.
Thanks Sidharth.π«π
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It’s beautiful β£οΈ
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Thanks Asthaisha!π€
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My pleasure π€π€β€οΈ
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