Will you still love me?

I am not that dancer whose every step drips off the dazzling grace to take your breath away.
I am not that singer who can melt your heart by singing songs of togetherness in her melodious voice.
I am not that artist who can take you by awe by her effortless strokes on the canvas and take you at the place where roses are red and the eyes can witness the most enchanting view.
I am not that writer who can write beautifully about the betrayals of her beloved.
Neither I am that girl who can turn the eyes by the charming spell of her marvellous beauty.

There is nothing great in me having worth falling for. Will you still fall for me?

There may be times,
When you’d need me but I cant be with you.
When you want to hear ” I am there”, but all I can say is just let me be!
Will you still love me?
I may be yours but I can’t be like you, you see.
I can’t be the way you want me to be. Rather I don’t want to.
I don’t know what love is nor I have any to give you.
All I have is a world, painted in black and white containing the crimson streams of pain and melancholy.
Tell me, will you still love me?

Ohh! C’mon, what are you thinking of? Just give me a NO and go away. Let’s make it quick and easy.
But even after reading each word above, if you wanna give me a YES, then don’t stay, please. Coz then you deserve better than me !!

When initially I thought of writing this, I wanted to add some good lines to be the source of hope. At last, thinking hard of it, I decided to go against it and that’s how it is!

Thanks for reading!!πŸ’«

Published by Chetna

Hello! First of all ,thank you for stopping by in this city and a heartfelt welcome to you. Myself Chetna,just an ordinarily different girl like you. At times ,I have literally tsunami of emotions in me about various things going on near me.And so here I am ,to calm down that tsunami ,so that the sea inside me can feel peace and have the pleasure of your ship sailing through it!! Here I will be posting my write ups , quotes and some of my favourite pick ups from the stories or novels. I will always be all ears on how you feel after and about reading my posts.So feel free to share your precious views .Hope you will have a good journey! Happy reading!❀

87 thoughts on “Will you still love me?

    1. Thanks Happy! It definitely is.πŸ˜…
      You got me there!!πŸ™ˆπŸ˜‚
      I just tried to be honest brutally!
      Btw, after reading the last line of the poem what did you interpret? I want to know.πŸ˜…

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      1. Well… each mind reads it it’s own way … for me it was this line

        There is nothing great in me having worth falling for. Will you still fall for me?

        If the answer is yes … that guy doesn’t deserve me πŸ˜…

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      2. I meant that even after knowing that I have nothing special or great and knowing all my flaws, if he is ready to accept and love me, then he must really be someone special and deserves someone better than me and not ordinary one like me!πŸ˜…

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      3. Ohhh … πŸ˜…I am my favorite u see.. and I am special, each one is special πŸ˜‚so a different view ..
        well I can relate though, I used to be like this for many years … 😊especially during my heart break epidode .. many years ago

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  1. All I have is a world, painted in black and white containing the crimson streams of pain and melancholy.

    these lines πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

    so so beautifully written!!!

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  2. Chetnaaaaa!!😍
    I’m astound. Accepting the one with their flaws is not something everybody can do. Well, forget about people. Most importantly accepting one self with our own flaws is one step toward self love.
    Love is may be about knowing whom to choose? But how does it look like we still don’t know! (I don’t know why I wrote thisπŸ™ˆ)
    Thing is… I’m loving this post of yours! This is meant to be saved.

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    1. Anushkaaa!! I am really glad to read this comment of yours.
      Ahh! Well said girl.
      Answer is confusing. 😝
      Btw, ykw I don’t really think that I have written about any of my flaws here. I am just that way and it’s not really in my control.πŸ˜…

      This is the best you could say to me, indeed!!


      1. I know how I’ll behave to a situation some of the times and usually behave like that only but yeah sometimes I can be unpredictable and behave the excat opposite of what should have been done!!πŸ€“πŸ€“

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      2. Well, many a times life puts us into the situation which we couldn’t think of. But still we have to take action. And our every action is related to our own predict of future, you see. Whether it comes true or not is just a probability.
        Predictability and the opposite are interconnected.🀐

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  3. Chetna… your last line killed me. I don’t think I can express rightly what I felt here. Woah. As a piece of art, it was perfect. It moved me like nothing has for a long time. Very well done…πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ™ŒπŸ€œπŸ€›

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      1. You deserve all smiles, especially if you keep writing such heartfelt content. And you’re kind to be asking about that friendship wala post. It is nothing more than a fictionalized version of my gone back years. And I’m not really sure how interesting it will be. But I might be able to post in 15-20 days. I will put out the ones which are screaming louder in my head first. But thanks for showing such interest Chetna. I am humbled. πŸ™πŸ™

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      2. If it’s interesting or not, let that be just an opinion Sundaram.
        Whatever you are gonna write, I wanna read that. And I am not kindπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ but all curious to find you in my reader section soooon….

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      3. And there I will be, for sure, with something or other. πŸ‘πŸ˜€ I mostly get enough time to read and write blogs on weekends… Thanks again. You make me feel good about my writing, Chetna. Take care…πŸ™πŸ€˜πŸ™

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  4. “People said Ove saw the world in black and white. But she was color. All the color he had. ”
    That comes from one of my favorite books, a man called ove, which I haven’t read yet.
    The writeup is relatable, but don’t keep thinking in that way.
    “You are all the colors in one, at full brightness!”
    That’s from the book all the bright places, which I haven’t read till now.
    P. S. You got two book suggestions huhπŸ˜‚πŸ’«πŸ‘‹

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    1. Favorite without even reading it, eh!? Nice.πŸ˜‚
      It’s more about the colors they look for to love than what I have, I guess!
      I am grateful, milord.πŸ™ˆπŸ˜‚


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