The Eternal Gift

No matter what the odds are

I always find her by my side,

Although the wins and achievements were in my name,

But she was the one who gleamed with pride.

For the catastrophes approaching my way,

I couldn’t care lesser,

For I know that I won’t be alone ‘coz she will always be there.

Her gentle hands caress me whenever I feel weak,

She is the only sun my sky knows when it becomes dark and bleak,

I can’t even measure what all she’s sacrificed so far,

She possesses the virtues of fortitude,endurance and patience knowing no bars,

She is the wide earth for me to walk,

turquoise sea offering depth of peace,

Radiant sun for me to be warm,

And the seamless sky for me to breathe .

The God too marvels at His mystique creation,

Who carries in her a world of love beyond any imagination.

I used to wonder if there can be any other like her,

Then I heard the voice from within

“No ,It is impossible

For anyone else to even be compared

Let alone be similar to her.

She is a blessing to you from the almighty

That comes only to the fortunate.”

That time my little innocent heart did discover,

The eternal gift in the name of my mother!!

Published by Chetna

Hello! First of all ,thank you for stopping by in this city and a heartfelt welcome to you. Myself Chetna,just an ordinarily different girl like you. At times ,I have literally tsunami of emotions in me about various things going on near me.And so here I am ,to calm down that tsunami ,so that the sea inside me can feel peace and have the pleasure of your ship sailing through it!! Here I will be posting my write ups , quotes and some of my favourite pick ups from the stories or novels. I will always be all ears on how you feel after and about reading my posts.So feel free to share your precious views .Hope you will have a good journey! Happy reading!❤

26 thoughts on “The Eternal Gift

  1. It’s amazing …appropriate words, your writing style are just glorifying the beauty of the poem so well …naicee one…a commendable start..🤟♥️ ♥️🔥 A small thanks to all the mommies out there …for making your children capable enough to withstand any storm or thunder that come in their way…belated happy mother’s day♥️♥️to the epitome of love,care and selflessness.♥️


    1. Thank u soo much Mukta for such appreciating words!
      And yes…we will always be indebted by her sacrificed,we won’t be able to repay it back,ever but be grateful for the same always!
      Cheers to all the mothers!❤💫

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  2. Beautiful composition! Loved these two lines the most :

    “She is the only sun my sky knows
    when it becomes dark and bleak”

    “She is the wide sky for me to walk,
    turquoise sea offering depth of peace”

    Have a good blogging journey ahead. 😊

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