No matter what the odds are
I always find her by my side,
Although the wins and achievements were in my name,
But she was the one who gleamed with pride.
For the catastrophes approaching my way,
I couldn’t care lesser,
For I know that I won’t be alone ‘coz she will always be there.
Her gentle hands caress me whenever I feel weak,
She is the only sun my sky knows when it becomes dark and bleak,
I can’t even measure what all she’s sacrificed so far,
She possesses the virtues of fortitude,endurance and patience knowing no bars,
She is the wide earth for me to walk,
turquoise sea offering depth of peace,
Radiant sun for me to be warm,
And the seamless sky for me to breathe .
The God too marvels at His mystique creation,
Who carries in her a world of love beyond any imagination.
I used to wonder if there can be any other like her,
Then I heard the voice from within
“No ,It is impossible
For anyone else to even be compared
Let alone be similar to her.
She is a blessing to you from the almighty
That comes only to the fortunate.”
That time my little innocent heart did discover,
The eternal gift in the name of my mother!!
π·happy π·mother’s π·dayπ·
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Happy Mother’s Day to you too.πΉ
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Itβs amazing β¦appropriate words, your writing style are just glorifying the beauty of the poem so well β¦naicee oneβ¦a commendable start..π€β₯οΈ β₯οΈπ₯ A small thanks to all the mommies out there β¦for making your children capable enough to withstand any storm or thunder that come in their wayβ¦belated happy motherβs dayβ₯οΈβ₯οΈto the epitome of love,care and selflessness.β₯οΈ
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Thank u soo much Mukta for such appreciating words!
And yes…we will always be indebted by her sacrificed,we won’t be able to repay it back,ever but be grateful for the same always!
Cheers to all the mothers!β€π«
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A very beautifully penned poem π….. It’s difficult to express feelings through words but you have very gracefully woven words with your feelingsπ
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Thanks Komalπ«
I am glad u liked itπ
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It’s just that sometimes the feelings get too excited and end up coming out through your penπ
Like when an electron gets the energy it jumps to the outer shellππ
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Good attempt Chetna. And what a day to dedicate your feelings….
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Thank u Mam π
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Good start Chetna
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Thank u Mamπ
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Heartfelt poem punctuated with cute pics!β€οΈπ
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Profile pic me zyaada samajhdaar lag rahe ho! π
Just kidding bro…π
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That means lockdown is doing you good!ππ
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Btw,Thanx for the complimentπ€π
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Beautiful composition! Loved these two lines the most :
βShe is the only sun my sky knows
when it becomes dark and bleakβ
βShe is the wide sky for me to walk,
turquoise sea offering depth of peaceβ
Have a good blogging journey ahead. π
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Thank u so much Aeedah for your appreciation,I am glad that you liked it!β€
And also for your best wishes π
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This is undoubtedly very good and beautifully presented π₯°π₯°
Love you π πππ
Keep it on
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Thanks a ton!ππ
It feels great to know that you liked itβ€
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It is really awesome
Me feel loved in your words β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thank you soo much!ππ
I am glad that you found it nice.β€
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Mother’s indeed are a blessing π
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Yes!
Thank you for giving it a read.π€
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You’re welcome π
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